As I’ve done the past many years, I’m offering up a critique of your work (up to 12,500 words). I’m doing so again, with all the proceeds going to benefit this year’s Worldbuilders charity drive (Pat Rothfuss’s wonderful charity).
If you win this auction, I’ll read the opening of your novel, a short story, whatever you’d like (but only a single story, please). I’ll then draft a formal review that will cover such things as how well the story opens, complicates, and closes, how well the characterization works, dialogue, tone, pacing, tension, and a host of other issues. Essentially, I’ll provide a formal review on the positives and negatives found in the story.
Interested? Head on over to the eBay auction to bid!